Have begun to wrtie my treatment but guess what, I have finally found my title after great thought.
Heres the first section of my treatment.
Title: No one knows?
One liner: The subtle life of one man and his new found pet.
This short film is based on a true story of Jaycee Lee Dugard, she was lifted from the streets in 1991, aged 11. She was entrapped in a shed for 18 years and gave birth to two daughters who in turn were trapped with their mother. This was resolved last year.
1 comment:
Great to see you getting your ideas down and out there.
3 things:
Title - should there be a question mark there?
One liner - mmmmn. Not good. but you don't need a one liner.
Story: This is very important. Remember the brief, you must produce an ORIGINAL narrative story. ie, one not based on a pre-existing story.
Now there's nothing stopping you being inspired by this true event and making it YOUR OWN STORY, but you cannot just use the original true life story as it stands. Clear?
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