chris, good to see you engaging with the blog. This sounds an exciting start, BUT it's not a pitch. A pitch needs to tell me something about the story concept, where is this just tells me how it will affect me... You could you abit of it, combined with the story idea.. but it must be 25 words. Work on your 1 page treatment first and the 25 words should come from that. s
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chris, good to see you engaging with the blog. This sounds an exciting start, BUT it's not a pitch. A pitch needs to tell me something about the story concept, where is this just tells me how it will affect me... You could you abit of it, combined with the story idea.. but it must be 25 words. Work on your 1 page treatment first and the 25 words should come from that.
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